Stopped Cold

Stopped Cold

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Things aren’t what they seem in peaceful Mistville, North Carolina.
Margaret McWhorter enjoys a laid-back Freshman year in high school swimming and hanging out with friends—until the day her brother, Sean, suffers a stroke from taking steroids. Now he’s lying unconscious in a hospital.
Anger sets a fire for retribution inside her, and Margaret vows to make the criminals pay. Even the cop on the case can't stop her from investigating. Looking for justice, she convinces two friends, Jimmy and Emily to join her in a quest that takes them through a twisted, drug-filled sub-culture they discover deep in the woods behind the school. Time and again they walk a treacherous path, and come face-to-face with danger.
All the while Margaret really wants to cure Sean, heal the hate inside, and open her heart to love.


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Things aren’t what they seem in peaceful Mistville, North Carolina.
Margaret McWhorter enjoys a laid-back Freshman year in high school swimming and hanging out with friends—until the day her brother, Sean, suffers a stroke from taking steroids. Now he’s lying unconscious in a hospital.
Anger sets a fire for retribution inside her, and Margaret vows to make the criminals pay. Even the cop on the case can't stop her from investigating. Looking for justice, she convinces two friends, Jimmy and Emily to join her in a quest that takes them through a twisted, drug-filled sub-culture they discover deep in the woods behind the school. Time and again they walk a treacherous path, and come face-to-face with danger.
All the while Margaret really wants to cure Sean, heal the hate inside, and open her heart to love.


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My first day as a Freshman at Meriwether Christian High School in Mistville, North Carolina, the sun shone on a small plant with pink blossoms on the window sill and gave Mrs. Hornsby’s English class a cheerful look. She stood in front of pine straight back chairs scrunched together in the middle of the room, the tables shoved up against the wall at the end of it.

“Today we’ll form a circle and get acquainted.”

Her voice sounded bubbly and kind, but I wanted to escape to the pool or a beach. She directed us with her hands as we scraped chairs across the laminated floor and took our seats. That’s when I noticed Jimmy Willmore staring at me. As self-conscious as a possum in a dog show, I peered at my lap. Was he checking me out? I raised my head and glanced at him.

He shifted his gaze to the blackboard.

Mrs. Hornsby ran her hand through her short, salt-and-pepper-colored hair then twirled around. “Let’s start with you.” She gestured toward a pretty girl with dainty features and long, blonde hair.

“I’m Sally Dumont, a transfer student from North Wilkes.”

The other kids gave their names, but I let them fade into the background while I thought about Jimmy Willmore. Then it was my turn. “I’m Margaret McWhorter, and I entered Meriwether in middle school.”

Four students later we finished introducing ourselves.

Mrs. Hornsby said, “We’ll study some of America’s great poets and authors this year.”

Book covers blown up as posters filled the wall behind her desk. I squinted and scanned them for authors’ names as she picked up two books and held them high. “I ordered these with the others, but for some reason they arrived late. They’re at the campus bookstore now. I’ll let you leave early, so you can swing by and pick them up.” She started handing out the syllabus. “Be sure to have your books by tomorrow. I have an assignment to give you based on one of them.”

Jimmy grasped the papers when Mrs. Hornsby walked by him. Then he stood and trekked across the floor, but he lingered at the front of the room.

Moments later I headed out.

Jimmy opened the door for me then fell into step beside me. “How’s it goin’?”

My heart thumped against my chest. “Good.” I tried to think of something else to say, but my brain locked. We walked stride for stride in silence on the sidewalk lined with bright green foliage. We passed underneath the branches of the huge, old oak tree and strolled beside the yellow ironweed on the way to the science building.

Then Jimmy turned to the left. “See ya’,” he said.

Being so close to him took away my breath. All I could do was wave.



~*~



Six weeks later Jimmy still stared at me in English class, but he didn’t hold the door for me.

I was deep into my third novel, and Dad was deep into my brother, Sean’s, football games. This Saturday Dad perched in the rust and green-checked easy chair with his feet propped on the matching footstool. Wrinkles creased his forehead like rivers on a map, his grayish blue eyes cold. He glared at Sean who stood in front of him like a page having an audience with the king.

The urge to rush in the den and tell Dad to stop upsetting Sean filled every fiber of my being, but I dared not interfere. I stood outside the door and waited in the lonely hall with its cold parquet floor and empty beige wall.

Sean shook his head. “Coach is taking me out, sir. I’m not winning enough games.”

Sunshine seeped through the mini blinds creating a peaceful glow that seemed out of place.

“Son, you’ll have to reclaim that position. To clench your college football career, you need to be the number one quarterback for Meriwether Christian High.”

Sean sidled around, probably to move out of Dad’s line of view. “I had a meeting with Coach Rogers.”

Dad turned up his large palm and gestured. “Good. That’s a start.”

Sean ranked at the top of his class, but he struggled with sports. He may have looked like Dad, but he inherited our mom, Kelly’s, mediocre athletic ability.

“No, I mean I met with him when he told me he was replacing me as first-string quarterback.” Sean glanced at me.

I nodded to give him support.

Sean shifted his weight. “A new guy, Harold Gravitts, will start. He moved here two weeks ago from Greenstown, North Carolina. You were there the last two games. You know we lost because I threw bad passes in the end zone.”

Dad bounded out of the chair as though he’d been shot from a cannon and knocked the coffee cup off the walnut occasional table. “What can this guy do that you can’t?”

“He’s no better than I am in scrimmages.”

Dad lowered himself into the seat and tapped his lips. “Hmm. Maybe he’s a jock who holds back in practice, but Coach Rogers sees his special talent.”

“I don’t know what it is, but—”

“Of course, you don’t. You’re not a coach.”

Sean wrung his hands. “He wouldn’t have to be Super Bowl quality to have something on me.”

Sean’s quivering voice pierced my heart.

“I’m not a great quarterback like you were.”

Six-foot-three, Dad earned the nickname Bullet when he broke the passing records at the university in the 1980s. Often when he introduced himself as Randolph Sean McWhorter, he’d grin and add, “AKA Bullet. I played quarterback in college.”

“Maybe you need more strength in your throwing arm. Lift more weights. Do whatever it takes to get back that position.”

Dad’s humiliating words had to hurt Sean. Was Sean’s heart falling to his toes like mine did when I confessed something less than perfect? Seeing that disappointed look on Dad’s face always hit me in the gut. Sometimes, Dad teased me and cheered me up if I was sad. Mom said he worked hard to give us a good home, but he could make me feel as little as a worm. Did Sean feel that way now? Fury raged inside me and fists formed involuntarily at my sides.

Dad picked up the coffee cup and peered at the spot on the rust-colored carpet. “Just look at that mess.” He rubbed his shoe across it.

What about the stain Dad put on Sean’s heart?

With the vocal explosion in the den over, the house grew as quiet as a cave. The sadness in Sean’s eyes when he walked toward me could have made a stone cry.

“Thanks for being there for me, Margaret. At least my failure to qualify for first string quarterback isn’t a stinger.”

“What’s a stinger? That feeling you sometimes get when you pull a muscle overdoing in sports?”

“That too, but I meant a bad personality trait like a temper or a big ego. Something that can upset other people. For instance, I can’t throw great passes, but that doesn’t degrade anyone else. It’s a shortcoming, not a stinger.”

I hugged him around the neck. “You make people happy. You’re the best whether you ever play first string quarterback again or not.” We had each other.

“I’ll deal with it.” Sean lifted his chin and marched up the oak staircase.

He seemed upset, and all the talk about stingers wasn’t like him, but he’d take Dad’s outburst with a stiff upper lip. He always did. After all, both of us knew excellence brought praise from Dad. Failure or mediocrity brought about one of Dad’s stingers, his wrath.

Sean would be fine by the time he changed clothes, left the house, and saw his friends at practice. If I bummed a ride with him, he might rush to bring me home. He needed to hang out with the guys after the scrimmage, not chauffer around a tag-along. The best thing I could do for him was take myself to swim practice.

The scene lingered in my mind as I proceeded to the garage. I took hold of my shiny blue bicycle, hopped on, and rode away. At least Dad let me choose my sport. He bought the bike for me when I qualified for the state swimming championship this past summer. Swimming refreshed me, relieved stress, and lifted my spirits, but would I even have a bike if I didn’t compete in the sport? That thought made me nauseous as I rode down the winding, mountain road.

Bright orange, red, and yellow leaves blended over the hills like splotches on an artist’s canvas. Tourists who flocked here in October said Mistville, North Carolina, was such a peaceful place with breath-taking sights. For me, the landscape was a mirage. A voice constantly screamed inside my head, you have to be the best.

A granite entryway with a bronze nameplate marked Meriwether. I whizzed past it onto a street lined with oak and maple trees, whipped around the curve that led to a steep incline and pedaled up it. The brick gym sat at the top amid a huge grassy lawn with a circular drive. I parked my bike in the remaining spot in the bike stand then scanned the football players on the practice field across the street.

I’d told myself Sean was fine, but doubt nagged me. If I saw him having fun with the guys, I’d breathe easier. He wasn’t there. A few steps took me closer. I shielded my eyes and squinted, surveying the numbers on the players’ jerseys. Nope. A sinking sensation hit me. It wasn’t like Sean to run late, but maybe he had today. No wonder, after all that had happened at the house.

Dad’s muscled arm knocking over his coffee was all I could think about as I opened the glass doors to the lobby filled with trophy cases. How could I practice with my insides coiled as tight as a spring? I slung open the locker room door and strolled in. The clock on the wall stared me in the face—five after nine. No wonder no one else was in here. I was late.

My chest tightened as I pulled off my blouse and yanked on my black practice suit. I hurried out.

My teammates who already swam splashed water all over the deck. Would Coach Lohrens make me do push-ups for not being on time? I stiffened in dread. Thank goodness, he talked to one of the parents and had his back to me.

Relief coursed through my veins as I dove in the water behind Tammy Morris. Whether I practiced freestyle or my favorite stroke, butterfly, an image of Sean’s unhappy face pressed on my mind like a vice. It seemed I pulled through gelatin instead of water. Was Sean all right? Why wasn’t he at the football field? Needing a breather, I stopped at the wall. Churned up water sloshed around me as the swimmers flew past.

Tammy came in right behind me. “What’s happening? How are ya?”

Great teammates, Tammy and I weren’t close enough for me to discuss Sean and Dad. “I’m good.” I pushed off the wall and swam away.

Thinking of nothing but Sean as I pulled and kicked through the endless water, I lost all sense of time. Finally, I paused again at the wall.

Tammy touched my shoulder. “Maggie Butterfly, it’s over. We can leave.” Her black cap squeaked as she rubbed it together when she yanked it off. Tiny rivulets of water dripped from her long brown hair as she ran her hands through it. She was my only friend who called me Maggie and then added the name of the stroke I was known for.

“I couldn’t concentrate.” I pulled up on the bars on the starting block and hoisted out of the pool.

She gently flipped her towel across my shoulder. “I have days like that too. Forget it.”

She may have had a day when she couldn’t concentrate, but I doubted she’d had a day start off like mine.

Chatter from the rest of the team faded into the background as Tammy opened the door to the lobby. A cool draft blew in as someone entered from outside, and we scurried to the locker room.

Tammy picked up her swim bag. “Some of us are going to lunch at the Steak House. Wanna come?”

Getting attention from a junior made me feel grown-up and sophisticated. At meets we swam with our own age groups, but we worked out according to our skill levels. Thanks to Sean, who insisted I learn to swim at age three, I practiced with the upperclassmen. I hardly felt like talking to a bunch of people after the events at the house, and I’d already planned to meet Emily Daven, my best friend.

“Thanks. I wish I could, but I can’t.” Tammy’s invitation meant a lot. I hoped she wouldn’t be offended.

Tammy smiled, and her eyes looked kind. “OK, see you later.”

I pulled on my blue jeans and put on the green blouse Mom liked for me to wear. She said it matched my eyes and made them sparkle. I closed the door to the locker room, shut my mind to swimming times and competitions, and left the chlorinated world behind. Only Sean remained in my thoughts as I walked outdoors.

I scanned the football field. It was empty. I hopped on my bike and pedaled up the tree-lined road toward The Grill. Why did Coach Rogers have to replace Sean with Harold Gravitts? Why couldn’t Sean still be the starting quarterback?

Plenty of vacant spaces waited for me at the restaurant bicycle stand. I parked in front of the brick building then went inside. The football players seated at a round table close to the door talked about missed tackles, end-arounds, and flea flickers. Sean wasn’t with them. Where was he?

The smell of cheeseburgers wafting from the kitchen made my stomach growl as I meandered by the swimmers who hadn’t gone to the Steak House.

Jay Arnold, the captain of the boys’ team, pulled a chair up to their table. “Hi, Margaret, have a seat.”

“Thanks, but I promised Emily I’d meet her.” Emily played no sports.

He winked. “Gotcha. Catch you later.”

The noise from the front of the room turned to meaningless chatter as I walked to the back where Emily waited. I dropped down into a chair across from her.

“Hi, when did you get here?”

She brushed her long black hair behind her ears. “I just sat down, but I can’t wait to tell you about Owen!” Her dark eyes twinkled.

Ray Jones, a tall lanky redhead on a work scholarship at Meriwether, arrived to take our orders.

“I’d like fruit salad and a grilled cheese sandwich.” Emily gazed up at him.

Ray wrote on his pad then glanced at me.

“A chili cheeseburger.”

“You got it.” Ray put his pencil behind his ear.

I halfway followed the conversation with an image of the players on the football field without Sean flashing in my head. Had he gone to football practice? It wasn’t like him not to. I’d eat as fast as I could and go see if he was home. I leaned across the table. “So, Owen’s cool?”

Emily’s eyes lit up. “Oh, yeah.”

Emily was pretty hot too. A sophomore, she was five-feet-three inches and must’ve weighed only ninety-eight pounds. She had her mother’s long eyelashes and her father’s small nose.

“Owen’s so cute. Last night after the movie, we went to the Steak House. I was so hungry. I offered to pay my part. You know what he said?”

“No, what?”

“He said, ‘I asked because I wanted to see you. It’s my treat.’” Emily’s voice rose as she bounced in her seat. “Sincere, or fake?”

I sat back and smiled. “Sounds sincere.”

Emily and I met when she first moved to Mistville. As her new student buddies, Sean and I showed her around the Meriwether campus. She and I started hanging out then and never stopped.

Ray brought our food. “Here ya go.”

“Thanks, Ray,” I said.

Starving, I devoured large bites of my chili cheeseburger and fries while Emily munched dainty nibbles of grapefruit and orange wedges. So like her.

“Thanks for listening about Owen.” She spoke in a soft, lyrical voice.

“It’s cool you’re going out with him.” No psychologist, I’d only guessed at Owen’s sincerity, a small part of a person’s character, but I was glad I’d finally heard about Emily’s new boyfriend. I’d never mentioned my fascination with Jimmy to her. What would I tell her? He stared at me. How long could we discuss that? Anyway, today wasn’t the time to talk about him with the problems between Dad and Sean pressing on my mind.

She sipped her soda. “How’d you do on your lit test?”

“OK.”

Emily’s thin lips parted into a grin. “Yeah, right. You did better than that. Like literature’s not your best subject.”

“Margaret, you have a call.” Ray called out and pointed to the receiver on the counter in front of the cash register. “You can take it there.”

Surprise ran through me as I yanked my cell phone out of my purse. It was off. With all that was going on between Dad and Sean, apparently I’d forgotten to turn it on. Who would call me here? I bounded out of my seat with Emily on my heels.

“Margaret!” Mom’s voice sounded upset, strained.

I’d never heard her so choked up. My palms grew sweaty.

“Something’s happened to Sean.”

Everything around me blurred. The room swayed as Emily helped me to a chair.

“Sit down. What’s wrong? Who was that?” she asked.

“It was Mom. Sean’s at Mistville General Hospital. Can you take me?”

“Definitely. What about your bike?”

“Leave it. Dad can get it later. Can we go?”

“Yeah, we’re leaving.”

The concern written on Emily’s face barely registered with me as I stood, and we rushed to a scene I didn’t want to face.

 

 

 

 

 


Discussion Questions


 

 

 

 

 


Question 1: Tourists enjoy a peaceful atmosphere in Triville, North Carolina. Why doesn't that hold true for Margaret McWhorter, the heroine in Stopped Cold?



Answer 1: She’s under so much pressure from her father to succeed in sports. She’s stressed about her swimming times and whether or not she’ll qualify for a competition, such as the state meet. She also relates to her brother’s struggles as the quarterback for Meriwether Christian High School and worries that he can’t live up to their father’s expectations.



Question 2: What makes an emotional stinger better than a personality flaw, as far as Margaret's brother, Sean, is concerned?



Answer 2: He explains that an emotional stinger is a shortcoming that affects only the person who has it, such as Sean’s concern over his inability to complete long passes. A personality flaw, such as a bad temper, can hurt others.



Question 3: Why did Sean take Winstrol V?



Answer 3: Sean took the steroid on the advice of his coach. He claimed the drug would make Sean stronger and enhance his performance.



Question 4: Why did Sean's father push him to perform?



Answer 4: Sean’s grandfather had pushed him. Margaret’s best friend, Emily, asked Margaret if her father taught Margaret and Sean the same thing his father taught him. Then Margaret remembered her grandfather constantly bragged on her dad’s throwing arm. Her dad once said he believed the only thing his father liked about him was his ability to throw a pass. In Margaret’s words, “Dad’s father pushed him. Dad pushed us.”



Question 5: Margaret wishes her dad would be more like her Sunday school teacher. Why?



Answer 5: Margaret’s Sunday school teacher says we should love ourselves, because God created us in His image and gave us a special talent or talents to use for Him.



Question 6: What is Margaret's reaction at the hospital when she learns Sean's taken a steroid? What does she think about the drug dealers?



Answer 6: When Margaret’s Mom asked why people took Winstrol V, the doctor explained that it made athletes grow stronger and practice longer. The conversation confused Margaret. None of what the doctor said made any sense to her. When they rolled Sean into the room and she saw him in a coma, she grew very angry at the drug dealers and wanted to make them pay for what they’d done.



Question 7: Why do you think Margaret hated the drug dealers?



Answer 7: They hurt Sean, and she loved him so much. They were close, and she was proud of him. She feared they’d taken away his ability to do great things later in life. Sean and Margaret shared not only a blood bond, but one of knowing what it felt like to try to live up to their dad’s expectations, so she suffered a terrible loss.



Question 8: Margaret's Mom says, "People live their lives like beachcombers looking at a horizon not knowing what's on the other side." She was talking about faith. What does she mean?



Answer 8: She explains that we have limited vision. God is omniscient, but our vision has boundaries. She says, “That’s where faith comes in.”



Question 9: How did faith help Margaret?



Answer 9 Her mom’s faith gave her something to hang onto. When Reverend Hopewell visited he quoted Scripture saying prayer offered in faith will make a sick person well. Then he added, “We know God can heal Sean.” Margaret says a prayer right then for God to heal Sean. There’s no change in Sean’s condition, but Margaret says her faith needs to be stronger.



Question 10: Why do you think Margaret continued to pray after her prayer in the hospital failed?



Answer 10: She hoped with all her heart that healing Sean was God’s will. If it were, she believed God could heal Sean as well as her hate for the drug dealers. Later, she stopped in the hospital chapel and sorted through her feelings remembering that Jesus cared enough about Sean and her to die for their sins. Then she said a prayer asking God to heal Sean, her, and her family. When she left she said, “There were answers, peace and hope in this room.”
 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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